so cuute!

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Thanks!!

It's adorable~! Improvements, huh? I think you perhaps should have left some white around the eyes... you know where the blue of her pupil is? In the sides of that. As for the shading, not bad! You did a really good job! Well around the hair you could make it lighter in bits where the light hits and reflects, un? And maybe with the clothing there should be a little more shade depending on where the light source is comin' from. What you should do is pick and angle where the light is coming from, and colour all the sides of the person that the light would be hitting in the lighter shades, and the bits where the light doesn't hit (near the other side... eg if the light is going this way ---> and the person is here [person is here] Do lighter colours here --->[person is here]<-- and do shade here. ^^ As for shade, a little more black wouldn't hurt. Yes, you don't want to go over the top but it can make a really good effect!

Dx Sorry if that was a bit uncalled for. Once I start typing... ;_; If I have offended you, sorry! Just trying to give constructive criticism... >< I think it is a wonderfully coloured piccy nevertheless! For a first time, it's brilliant! (BTW my advice is probably invalid... I'm hopeless at colouring on the computer... xD It's just my opinion from doing Graphics at school that's got me blabbering..)

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Thank you so much for the comment!! Thank you! I'll improve. And hey, you didn't offend me or something, lulz, it helped out alot! Oh gawd, thank you thank you thank you thank you!

That's a really good constructive criticism! I'll do what you told me and remake the whole thing ^^

Thanks also for the comment!! Nyaa!!! Lucky you, they discuss graphics. In our school they don't teach us anything like that. Nyaaaa...

Remake it?? o_o;; But... it's already neat as! xD I did offend you, didn't I...

Anyway, that's just my silly little opinion... I've yet to work out how to colour in manga myself... all I can do is pick out features from looking at it. Making it is a whole different story... xD I just sorta judge the aesthetics, you know?

Eh, well in Graphics we do all sortsa stuff like instrument drawing (with rulers galore) but right back when we started, they taught us how to render/colour in. Like, with light sources and shading etc. x3 We picked it up from each other. Doesn't your school offer anything similar to that? Gotta love Graphics... some of the stuff we do is interesting! Like we've designed an easter egg box, a BBQ area, Pepsi logos, etc etc... right now I'm doing my current homework of creating a contemporary workstation AKA a fancy modern computer desk. xD It's not bad.

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so cutie!!!.....jejeje!...I like it...

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Thank you! I'm glad that you like it!

Naah, I won't remake it nalang! GAWD, that's too tiring. Lulz. NO!! You didn't offend me yo! Nyahaha, that critique was so encouraging! It makes me wanna do it all over again!

Maybe in second year they will teach us shadowing. Well, they're teaching us traditional art. The graphics that they only taught us is MS Paint! That was a pain in the @$$! Nyaa, I suck at traditional art. As in coloring in pencils and stuff.

Ohh I see. >< Colouring pencil can be a bit difficult. =3 I'm not so good at it either... but MS Paint? I lost my MS Paint years ago. Dx Sad, isn't it... but yes, I do hope they teach you shading soon! Traditional art is fine and all but some teachers tend to dwell on it which can be a pain... anyway, I'm glad I didn't offend ya. n.n; Phew..

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